Till now you have read that Agatha meets Venesa and they both start liking each other instantly. George asks Venesa out on the Christmas eve to which Venesa happily agrees. Will George be able to confess his feelings before her and will Venesa accept him. Continue reading to find out.
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The carnival was at its full surge. Delicious items were being sold fresh on the stalls. Various people dressed like Santa were entertaining the crowd, especially the children. The carnival was decorated by beautiful lights and decoratory items. People were walking, laughing, eating and enjoying.
A band of about ten boys were playing Christmas carols in the middle of the street. The environment was full of fun and excitement.
Venesa and George were walking amidst the crowds with smiles on their faces. They weren’t eating anything nor buying, they were just walking. Still they were happy. They were enjoying each other’s company.
They reached near the band. The band consisted of boys, all of about thirteen or fourteen years of age.
‘’Ven…?… would you mind if someone sings a song for you?… I think people will enjoy more and these boys will get something new to play…”
George asked while smiling towards her.
‘’Haha…I will mind.’’ Venesa chuckled, ‘’but there is no one who would play a song for me.’’ Venesa laughed and looked away.
When she turned towards George, he wasn’t there.
‘’ Ladies and gentlemen…’’ George’s voice came. Venesa was surprised to find him standing among the boys, guitar in one hand.
‘’…this song is for someone, who’s cakes do a magic on our taste, who’s voice is a music itself, who’s flowing golden hairs reminds us of springs…and whose face is like the full moon.’’
‘’Yehh..’’
‘’Wohoo!’’
The crowd started cheering loudly…
Venesa was stunned and exited at the same time. George was smiling to her…and his song began…
‘’OH! HOW TASTY THINGS HER HANDS MAKE…
YUMMY CHOCOLATES AND CUPCAKES…
IN RETURN, SHE’LL GIVE YOU HER SWEETEST OF SMILES
YOU WONT FIND ANY LIKE HER IN HUNDREDS OF MILES…
CUZ SHE’S NO ONE ELSE BUT VENESA..’’
The people were roaring and singing together with George. Couples were dancing together. There was a blast of happiness and joy…Venesa had never been so happy. She was just standing and watching George with awe.
‘’You didn’t mind right? You said you would?” George asked Venesa.
After enjoying the most exiting evenings of their life, George and Venesa were walking back to their homes.
‘’I didn’t… you sung it so well.’’
Venesa smiled back. The carnival was over but they could still experience its aftereffect. The song was fresh in their minds.
‘’George…’’
‘’Yes…?”
‘’Thanks… I really felt very happy… I mean… I really enjoyed today’s carnival… with you. Since you have came in my life,… everything is going right…’’ Venesa was happily talking to George but George had something else in his mind.
‘should I say it or not…should I ask her or not…’
George’s heart was asking his mind.
Finally George has mustered up the courage to ask Venesa. Is this going to be a happily ever after for both of them? Or this is the biggest turn in their life? George and Venesa would never be the same after this… what awaits them? Find out in chapter 13 next Sunday.
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